Gcse English Creative Writing

Gcse English Creative Writing-70
Surely nothing as fascinating and incredibly perfect as him.From the moment she first saw him in school, she knew he was the one she was meant to be with.

List four things from this part of the text about the ship.

Answer:1)There were noises and groans coming from the ship.2) The ship was listing and sinking.3) The ship had an incline from bow to stern.4) The ship has a main deck. Look in detail at this extract from lines 13 to 25 of the Source.

Introduction Only You Imogene Taylor had never believed in love at first sight until the day she first saw Sean. Just hearing those two words always caused a smile to break onto her face.

Just his name alone made her pale blue eyes sparkle with excitement, so it was no surprise that when she whenever she actually saw him her stomach tied in knots and it was all she could do to keep herself from going up to him and running her hands over his perfect body. What thoughts had filled her mind in every spare moment before he had come along?

**Please download the attached sample paper to understand the model answer** Q1.

Read again the first part of the Source from lines 1 to 12.How does the writer use language here to describe the narrator’s fright and confusion?Answer: The writer uses several rhetorical questions to highlight the narrator’s fright and confusion. ” This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening.A student, having read this section of the text, said: ‘The writer makes the reader feel sympathetic for the narrator.’ To what extent do you agree?Answer: The writer successfully makes the reader feel deeply sympathetic for the narrator.Additionally, the writer uses personification coupled with onomatopoeia to create a frightening atmosphere. This effective use of personification and onomatopoeia conveys the unnatural sounds the ship is making which is frightening the narrator.Finally, the violent verbs “shrieking” and “thundered” are used to describe the panicked movements of the animals. The animals are acting unnaturally, highlighting the precarious position the narrator finds himself in. You now need to think about the whole of the Source. How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader?As we read and witness the events unfold, we cannot help but feel sadness and pity for the narrator.This essay will examine how the writer successfully makes us as readers feel sympathy for the narrator.In the time they had spent together, he had never raised her voice at her, apart from the day she finished with him, and that had been understandable. "I was not ignoring you Liam, but I will in a minute if you keep acting like this. Waking up in Sean's arms had been come sort of fantasy before, but now things were different.Everything had now been put into a different perspective, and as she saw police cars mulling about and an ambulance speeding away she realized she still liked him, fancied him even, but wasn't infatuated by the thought of him anymore.

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